Comments

Comment Commented on Posted

oh HELL yes! this is so beautifully written! the prose poetry makes everything blend in, and you can't see how excellent each word and fluid sentence is until you peer closer. I love the similes and the way we can all feel for this is so terrifying: so disgustingly human. SO GOOD PLEASE KEEP WRITING! :D

Reflections of a Tired Girl 2 months ago

Thank you so much for the comments! I'm not exactly great at coming back to a long-term project, so this was a little rambly and loose.

Chapter One - REVISED 2 months ago

Thank you so much!

Chapter One - (title unknown)* 2 months ago

Thank you so much! That wasn't even my intention, but now I see the connection. :)

death bed 2 months ago

Hi, I have a few suggestions:

1. Pick a random word, and write a poem based on it.

2. Look up writing prompts on the internet

3. Read. I asked an international bestselling author for advice on becoming a better writer, and she said that the best way to improve is to read. Reading can also give you ideas on what to write as well

4. Write about what's going on in the world around you

5. If you want to make a habit of writing every day, force yourself to write. Even if your idea is terrible, write it down, even if it's only a line of poetry. At least you wrote today, and that's what matters.

Tiny Write by crisscross, July 23 2024 2 months ago

I agree! I really enjoyed the chapter. The shorter perspectives make you pay attention more, and it gives each paragraph - each word - more power. 

Chapter One - (title unknown)* 2 months ago

If I’m having writer’s block, I usually start by writing something that I know. Something meaningful to me, or something that’s happening around me.

Tiny Write by crisscross, July 23 2024 2 months ago

Thank you!

Don‘t you wonder how they all were you? 2 months ago

This is so true!

Strangers 2 months ago

Thank you! I feel like we learn so much when we're not trying to at all.

Camp 2 months ago