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I love all the details so much!!! "Left the lonely beetle all alone" is such a great line thematically, rhythmically, phonetically, syntactically

The Lonely Beetle 9 months ago

This is brilliant! I love how you play with your readers expectations in that first line. Also, "shatter the mountains" is such a great image! 

Roads & Rails 9 months ago

Amazing! I love reading about mythology and this looks so cool! Five star artwork!

Medusa 9 months ago

LOL

Tiny Write by conabe511, January 19 2024 9 months ago

Heroes of Olympus. I never re-read books but I've reread this series!

Tiny Write by Bookworm's Book-Nook, January 19 2024 9 months ago

I've never thought about that lol cool!

Tiny Write by dfendyr@kua, January 21 2024 9 months ago

Same! The author writes with this type of style that inexplicably makes me feel like I'm in a cozy room with a fireplace, I don't know if that's weird lol

Tiny Write by Bookworm's Book-Nook, January 19 2024 9 months ago

I just started Percy Jackson and the Lightning Thief a few days ago! So far I love it, and I'm honestly a little annoyed with myself for not starting this series sooner, thank you for the recommendation!

Tiny Write by Bookworm's Book-Nook, January 19 2024 9 months ago

Keeper of the Lost Cities, Percy Jackson and the Olympian’s, Heroes of Olympus, and Spy School. They’re all funny and also I love plot twists and these series are full of them!

Tiny Write by Bookworm's Book-Nook, January 19 2024 9 months ago

A good starter could be:

She watched as the beautiful woman/man/other danced across the room, seeming to float on the air.

Tiny Write by _astrid_, January 24 2024 9 months ago