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I wholly understand how you feel. It's so difficult to absorb a beautiful moment, bask in the NOW, when your mind is bombarding you with the anxieties of the future. You were able to capture that push-pull with real emotion behind it, and I commend you for that. That your last lines offer a sense of hope brightens the spirits of the reader, and I was happy to see them.

Thoughts on a Sunset 9 months ago

Just what I was going for! Thanks a bunch 

The Lonely Beetle 9 months ago

Thank you you’ve made my day! 

The Lonely Beetle 9 months ago

Thank you so much for your insight! 

The Lonely Beetle 9 months ago

Thank you for the feedback!

The Lonely Wanderer 9 months ago

Thanks!

The Lonely Wanderer 9 months ago

I'd suggest thinking of what you like to see in a book, maybe from the last time you read, what intrigued you...Or you can find some recommendations by genre on apps like Goodreads or a Google search. Make sure you start with a light read that you know you'll finish so you gather momentum. Good luck!

Tiny Write by bumblebea, January 31 2024 9 months ago

I know this isn’t exactly what the prompt proposed, but I still think it’s solid work that goes with determination.

I Will 9 months ago

I love this poem! For some reason it reminds me of the song "The blue" by Gracie Abrams...anyway it's really good! <3

If I were 9 months ago

love this...so relatable ugh!!! :)

that time of the month 9 months ago