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I love this poem, and how you showed the differences between Summer and Spring. And how you personify spring, as if it could break in your hands. :)

Fragile 10 months ago

That actually sounds quite good. Life is weird, and rambling thoughts are just part of it. 

Book Club post by LongBilledCurlew, May 28 2024 10 months ago

Yes I do too! I'll usually have a little brain crisis watching them, because life is so crazy. We're all going to die someday, and I am spending half an hour of this life along with thirty other people on this red double-decker driving through London, and how did we all end up here? 

Tiny Write by Bharat Dwivedi, May 26 2024 10 months ago

Aggh that sounds so awful! I don't have any food allergies but I am EXTREMELY allergic to penicillin. I had strep in January and took medicine; got hives a week later, and now I have to go to an allergist to test if I'm allergic to other medicine. ALLERGIES ARE THE WORST.

Tiny Write by Sparrow, May 27 2024 10 months ago

I sing my own made-up songs sometimes while biking/showering/walking to school, and while they aren't great, they make me feel good and I get bursts of dopamine when good lyrics seemingly pop out of nowhere. I recommend just starting to sing a little, about literally anything, and then trying to add on to whatever you've made. Good luck!!

Tiny Write by Omi Homie, June 1 2024 10 months ago

haha me too!

Book Club post by OverTheRainbow, May 26 2024 10 months ago

You should! They're awesome

Book Club post by OverTheRainbow, May 26 2024 10 months ago

Anybody have advice?

Tiny Write by LongBilledCurlew, May 30 2024 10 months ago

She did but I still love her.

Book Club post by Sparrow, April 3 2024 10 months ago

"When you look in the mirror and are displaced by the unrecognizable, / Are we really just confused?" 

This poem is extremely emotionally impactful. I've left this tab open on my computer for weeks now, coming back to it every so often, and each time it hits harder than the previous. You are an extremely talented writer and your works are captivating, deep, rich. More than empty words. Your words inspire thought and analysis. I don't usually post comments on this type of stuff, but wow. This has lingered in my mind far too long to not give it any acknowledgment. Thank you. <3

Real 10 months ago