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What a beautifully fraught scene! I love your use of sensory detail and repetition (misstep/misfortune).

a flurry of snow 8 months ago

I love how you captured the feeling of being a friend in the "now" but also in the "always."

9 Lines of Friendship 8 months ago

DEFINITELY read The Inheritance Games! They're what got me out of a reading rut and got me into mystery

Tiny Write by Transb33, December 18 2023 8 months ago

 

Dippy_Cat, I agree!

Book Club post by abigail_and_bean, January 31 2024 8 months ago

What a journey you take us on! The reader can't help but root for your success. I like the varied repetition halfway through!

Scaling 8 months ago

I love the Song of Achilles! It's so poetic and really immerses the reader in the story. 

Book Club post by DotToDot, January 23 2024 8 months ago

All the characters from the Six of Crows series. They're all unique, flawed, funny, and experience character growth over the course of the series. 

Tiny Write by coco, January 30 2024 8 months ago

I agree, the books very entertaining and it's hard to get bored of them.

Tiny Write by Bookworm's Book-Nook, January 19 2024 8 months ago

I love this so much! Forgive the writer's idiom, but you have got such a voice to your style! 

Mother's Shoes 8 months ago

"I used space to create unity" what a beautifully way to explain it! You really did! Such a wonderful painting. You really caught the soul of a place. 

Summer Day 8 months ago