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I absolutely love this poem!  I love how nicely the verses flow together and the diction. :)

Thinking About You 2 months ago

This is so visually beautiful!!

Counting Flowers 2 months ago

Hey! So I came up with this first verse! It took me a while since school started recently so I've been settling in :) 

Any tips for the last year of middle school and going through high school?

 Anyways, the poem is more about my experience, but feel free to edit or add to it! Maybe to make the poem apply to more people? I'm really looking forward to creating a poem with different writers! I love writing free verse poetry, but I haven't really explored other writing styles so maybe having others add their thoughts, will help expand the poem! 

Title: 

It's always been hard to know where I fit in. 

Some days, I try to socialize more than I do on other days, to make myself seem more approachable and fun. 

On other days, I try to use my knowledge to connect with the people who love exploring academics outside of school. 

Later, I might play basketball and find myself hanging out with the kids who love sports. 

I never really knew where I belonged, but writing has always been a bookshelf of my thoughts and secrets. 

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Add your ideas, tips, or edits! The poem also needs some title ideas, so feel free to post any ideas for that! 

Tiny Write by shivalihp, August 7 2024 2 months ago

Thank you! It certainly felt like it.

Beyond the world 2 months ago

No, I will check it out. Thank you!

Book Club post by Sparrow, August 21 2024 2 months ago

This absolutely transports you to another time and place... "Beyond the World" is an apt title.

Beyond the world 3 months ago

I love this take on the challenge! In so few words, you HAVE explained what a smartphone is. I wonder how someone from another era would respond to this, what questions they would ask.

smartphone. 3 months ago

A brave moment! Props to you for sticking up for your brother, who was in need of a little help. Your last words are powerful.

Make It Stop 3 months ago

thank you!!! <3 <3

duke's mayo 3 months ago

Have you read the Extraordinaries?

Book Club post by Sparrow, August 21 2024 3 months ago