Thank you! I wanted this poem to show how something as simple (and something that’s sometimes disliked) is beautiful, and I thought the last line showed that! :)
oh my. this is so so so beautiful!! i love the parentheticals, and the correlation that's pointed out between love and fear. so much depth, and there's a succinctness to this that makes it that much more poignant.
I’ve read most of your writings now, and each time I read this again and again it never ceases to amaze me. You have such a way with words. I honestly wish I could be as good at you with writing. So I’ll keep practicing, you are my inspiration Amelia_v .
I always bring a book because of that exact problem. Because I am 17 though, my parents don't let me anymore.
This hurts to read, in a good way.
Thank you! I wanted this poem to show how something as simple (and something that’s sometimes disliked) is beautiful, and I thought the last line showed that! :)
oh my. this is so so so beautiful!! i love the parentheticals, and the correlation that's pointed out between love and fear. so much depth, and there's a succinctness to this that makes it that much more poignant.
Ahhh this is so good. So well composed. Every line feels like it has a place!
I love that ending lie so much! "There are many great stories,
even in very simple lines."
The means a lot coming from one of my favorite writers. Thank you so much! <3
That sounds really hard; especially at parties where it feels awkward to be social.
Awww, thanks so much Evie. Your writing is also really really good(:
I’ve read most of your writings now, and each time I read this again and again it never ceases to amaze me. You have such a way with words. I honestly wish I could be as good at you with writing. So I’ll keep practicing, you are my inspiration Amelia_v .