GOOSEBUMPS. FREAKING GOOSEBUMPS. Amazing work. The last paragraph...the mark of an excellent dark-fiction writer is a terrifyingly great last sentence/paragraph.
This is so, so, so good. It makes me want to cry, it’s so touching. I just graduated from 8th grade and am having a similar situation, of nostalgia and sadness yet excitement at what’s to come. Thank you for writing this.
This is so incredible. Every word you chose, every metaphor, is perfectly elegant. I especially love "I am light-headed, drunk/on the heady perfume of summer." It's just so gorgeous!
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!!
GOOSEBUMPS. FREAKING GOOSEBUMPS. Amazing work. The last paragraph...the mark of an excellent dark-fiction writer is a terrifyingly great last sentence/paragraph.
oh, you are so welcome and thank you for commenting about it!
This is so, so, so good. It makes me want to cry, it’s so touching. I just graduated from 8th grade and am having a similar situation, of nostalgia and sadness yet excitement at what’s to come. Thank you for writing this.
Thank you!!!!
This is so incredible. Every word you chose, every metaphor, is perfectly elegant. I especially love "I am light-headed, drunk/on the heady perfume of summer." It's just so gorgeous!
Yup! It's excellent
Thank you so much!
I have no words. This is beautiful.
Ah yes, The Girl From the Sea. Have you read it?