This is so beautiful!! The descriptions are breathtaking, and I had to read it over twice because of how much I loved it! Also I can't believe you're only 11--this seems like something that could be in an anthology written by adults!! :)
Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing this piece even though it sort of felt like a confession I wasn't supposed to make. And thanks for noticing the prose style! :D
By the way you added Falconflight twice, as a warrior and deputy, both with different descriptions.
Beautiful, Silverfluff!
Oki!
Sorry for the late reply. I'm not the one who wrote the tag but there's a bunch of them all around Austin Texas. Really insperational message though!
This is so beautiful!! The descriptions are breathtaking, and I had to read it over twice because of how much I loved it! Also I can't believe you're only 11--this seems like something that could be in an anthology written by adults!! :)
beautiful & hauntingly true. love the line breaks. <3
Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing this piece even though it sort of felt like a confession I wasn't supposed to make. And thanks for noticing the prose style! :D
Thanks so much! It means a lot to me that you connect with my work!
i read it a month ago!! i really enjoyed it and the concept was cool :)
That's true, it might not be enough but we all have to try. Only then do we have a chance