I do shakespearean plays which are basically dialogue poetry and the best advice I got was to emphasize, especially like emotion words and the end of sentences though in poetry there aren't a lot of sentences lol. Good luck and have fun!
The ending stanza is a perfect ending to such an amazing and thoughtful piece. I had to read it twice it was so lovely. I love how you open with the same first two lines and switch them. Keep writing!
I love this so much!!! Such a good form of an opinion piece :)
I do shakespearean plays which are basically dialogue poetry and the best advice I got was to emphasize, especially like emotion words and the end of sentences though in poetry there aren't a lot of sentences lol. Good luck and have fun!
I will!
This is amazing!
thank you!
This made me smile. "Freckling the sky" gives fantastic imagery
I love this. Writing is so freeing and a great way to escape and explore so many things. Keep writing :)
The ending stanza is a perfect ending to such an amazing and thoughtful piece. I had to read it twice it was so lovely. I love how you open with the same first two lines and switch them. Keep writing!
"I've built my salt circle to hide from your demons" is a fantastic line. I love it. Keep writing!
I love the line breaks in this, it seems to tumble into the next line. Keep writing!