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this is simply beautiful. What a stellar opening line too, congrats on the daily read

First Snow 1 year ago

this made me smile

Haunting Hands 1 year ago

This is so interesting I keeping finding ways to interpret each line and how they fit together. really makes you think. keep writing!

As the Crow Lands 1 year ago

hm agreed with TheDemiDevil, I didn't realzie poetry books have a bit of a narrative/story throughout the book, but going by that logic however many poems can fit into that story. My favorite book of poems was like 300 pages lol. Its the Random House Book of Poetry so I personally would say however many poems you think are interesting and fit together. Publishers might be looking for a specific number

Tiny Write by Writer1326, October 16 2023 1 year ago

Pinterst poetry/writing prompts. Or, sometimes I just don't write for a bit.

Tiny Write by Anna_banana, October 23 2023 1 year ago

I love starting with an opening line and having it mean one thing, than by the end you repeat the last line but it has a whole knew meaning! It's not easy but so fun to figure out

Tiny Write by Anna_banana, October 23 2023 1 year ago

Originally I was on a writing site called storybird in middle school because my friends had accounts and wrote a tone of poems on there! Then the website decided to start charging monthly fees and I quite the site lol. Eventually found YWP thro a teacher

Tiny Write by Anna_banana, October 27 2023 1 year ago

Star, cosmos, planet, universe  things. What an interesting question

Tiny Write by Anna_banana, October 27 2023 1 year ago

I feel it!

An Autumn Tree 1 year ago

Such an interesting and dark retelling! You give persephone so much more agency in a story which normally lends her very little. Also, your prose is very effective. Vivid. The atmosphere you created with definitely stay with me. 

Persephone 1 year ago