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It's funny how limiting yourself in some way (telling yourself you're going to focus on one very specific topic or use only one material or one color) can sometimes challenge us in just the right way, and bring out the best in our creativity. Experimenting with only purple tones really paid off for you, because this is striking!

Purple Night 1 year ago

It's so easy to think of the frigid, sharp-edged, barren qualities of the season, but this poem brings out the beautiful side of winter, too! It's easy to forget.

A Wintry Reflection 1 year ago

I'm with you there! And nothing quite like that crunch beneath your feet, am I right? Sometimes I see a particular leaf and think to myself, Now that is a crispy one, perfect for my foot to make friends with...

Dancing Leaves 1 year ago

Thank you. I was very nervous to share this as I don't write many short stories and this one is close to my heart.
Thank you for being so kind.

Persephone 1 year ago

Wow thank you so much! 

Seasonal Reflection 1 year ago

Thank you so much! 

Gloomy 1 year ago

This is so good!! 

Gloomy 1 year ago

Trying to balance school and something else you love is always hard, and sadly does make anyone feel torn between the two. It can be hard to find a balance or needing to choose one. The picture really captures it well I think

Fork in the Road 1 year ago

I love the rhyming! I think it even adds to the narrator wondering about catching fireflies. Keep writing!

Firefly Catcher 1 year ago

oooo this was so good, especially the last paragraph. Agree with everything YellowS said. What a dark and bold retelling

Persephone 1 year ago