The description in this poem is beautiful. I love the lines "My skin is covered by endless rows of goosebumps". I can picture this in my mind. Your use of boldness and line breaks is so creative and gives so much to the poem. This poem is beautiful and is full of emotion.
I feel like I could envision everything that was happening just by the dialogue! That’s so cool!
this was absolutely incredible. your writing style is positively gorgeous and I love the dark twist you added.
i loved dress coded! thanks for this recommendation, I hadn't seen the first rule of climate club so i'll check it out. :)
they are definitely two of the most important people i know:)
The description in this poem is beautiful. I love the lines "My skin is covered by endless rows of goosebumps". I can picture this in my mind. Your use of boldness and line breaks is so creative and gives so much to the poem. This poem is beautiful and is full of emotion.
I loved reading this, it kept me on the edge on my seat. It was also incredible the way you made the characters come to life.
"a snow lamb as fired slabs." what an image!
This is SO good. I like the twist and how you defined imaginary in so many ways.
I feel like this image is so perfectly realistic, I can just picture the whole barn from looking at this drawing.
I often feel like more things should be explained better. Maybe we get stronger by having to figure them out? I don't know.