You nailed the atmosphere of a small town carnival: the sights, the smells, the sounds. I can picture it so clearly!
You're welcome
That's nice to know, thank you!
Thanks :)
This means that you write with feel. And if you like to write like that you should keep writing in that way.
It would have been cool, although I know from experience that it kind of sucks when it actually happens. Hope the water goes down :)
Thank you!!
Thanks so much for the comment! I appreciate any opinions or criticisms, it helps me become a better writer.
Beautiful work! : )
Unfortunately not, but that would be cool lol. The water was so deep that no cars could even drive down the street (that’s why I walked to school)
[Illustration by Ice Blink, YWP]
You nailed the atmosphere of a small town carnival: the sights, the smells, the sounds. I can picture it so clearly!
You're welcome
That's nice to know, thank you!
Thanks :)
This means that you write with feel. And if you like to write like that you should keep writing in that way.
It would have been cool, although I know from experience that it kind of sucks when it actually happens. Hope the water goes down :)
Thank you!!
Thanks so much for the comment! I appreciate any opinions or criticisms, it helps me become a better writer.
Beautiful work! : )
Unfortunately not, but that would be cool lol. The water was so deep that no cars could even drive down the street (that’s why I walked to school)