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"You are at peace." Peaceful it is. This poem so well highlights winter's quiet beauty, something easy to lose sight of when the gray days seem neverending... Lovely read.

Footprints 1 year ago

Thank you! 

9 Lines of Friendship 1 year ago

Wow! This poem intrigues me--who/what is it about? I love and the imagery of the jar and your use of questions to create a desperate tone. 

Trapped in a Jar 1 year ago

What a beautifully fraught scene! I love your use of sensory detail and repetition (misstep/misfortune).

a flurry of snow 1 year ago

I love how you captured the feeling of being a friend in the "now" but also in the "always."

9 Lines of Friendship 1 year ago

DEFINITELY read The Inheritance Games! They're what got me out of a reading rut and got me into mystery

Tiny Write by Transb33, December 18 2023 1 year ago

 

Dippy_Cat, I agree!

Book Club post by abigail_and_bean, January 31 2024 1 year ago

What a journey you take us on! The reader can't help but root for your success. I like the varied repetition halfway through!

Scaling 1 year ago

I love the Song of Achilles! It's so poetic and really immerses the reader in the story. 

Book Club post by DotToDot, January 23 2024 1 year ago

All the characters from the Six of Crows series. They're all unique, flawed, funny, and experience character growth over the course of the series. 

Tiny Write by coco, January 30 2024 1 year ago