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I love the pretty simplicity of your poem, the imagery is so relaxing to read! 

A Pathway of Hope 1 year ago

I love pineapple on pizza! Especially with pickled jalapeños. But I could just be an uncouth west coaster :) 

Tiny Write by Amelia_v, August 18 2023 1 year ago

YES! every time I listen to Leonard Cohen. 

Tiny Write by Writer1326, August 24 2023 1 year ago

This is just a random factoid... I don't really write lyrics, so I'm not a great person to awnser this question... but in the classical world, the words for poem and song were often the same, and most poetry was sung or at least chanted! So the connection between the two goes back a long way... though  think it's a lot more difficult to put free verse to music. 

Tiny Write by Writer1326, August 30 2023 1 year ago

I can't believe its my junior year of collage this year! I'm starting off with a study abroad program in Rome, which is very very very exciting but even more unmooring! 

Tiny Write by eyesofIris, August 28 2023 1 year ago

thanks!!

lily pads & lotuses 1 year ago

Great idea ty for the feedback!! Sorry I didn’t see this till now!!

lily pads & lotuses 1 year ago

The imageryyyyy chefs kiss

event horizon 1 year ago

This is a really interesting concept!

Eavesdropping 1 year ago

Definitely a lot of decisions to be made. Between college tours and SATs, it's just a lot all at once. Thanks for the encouragement and I hope you enjoy the school year too!  

Tiny Write by eyesofIris, August 28 2023 1 year ago