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The great power of imagination... There's humor in this, with you one moment scrambling through the woods as a forest animal, the next sleighing dragons. Probably the closest we can ever come to living out our fantasies -- especially when they're of the world of fantasy -- is through our writing and the writing of others, and I'm glad to see you're doing that!

Waning Moon, Fleeing Soul 6 months ago

I feel this poem so much. Sometimes we learn harsh truths alongside the important lessons that shape us; actually, that's usually the way of things. There is no even split in the poem: It's the good and the bad all wrapped up together, which is exactly how life presents itself to us. I hope you come away from this year with the brighter memories shining, and the harder facts and observations fading a little bit in the distance. 

What I Learned This Year In School 6 months ago

I would try Insignificant Events in the Life of a Cactus by Dusti Bowling, and Roll With It by Jamie Sumner

Tiny Write by Fainting Goat, May 12 2024 6 months ago

This is amazing. I had similar feelings when the only bracelet a friend had ever given me broke in a pond, and it was lost to the fish. I hope you start feeling better soon Popcorn. I'm thinking of you.

Just a Bracelet 6 months ago

I love the way you portrayed your message to the reader. I've had a similar feeling before and I could never describe it, but I think I just found out how. 

Just a Bracelet 6 months ago

Thanks, I'm glad your mom's okay now. Thalia says that she also wants to become a neurosurgeon too. 

For Thalia (In honor of what she went through) 6 months ago

This poem gave me goosebumps. You two are both so strong. I cannot imagine what your friend must have been through, though I have experienced something similar with my mom, (she's okay now) and I know how hard it is, especially at such a young age. People like Thalia are the reason I want to become a pediatric oncologist when I grow up. Tell her she's an inspiration, you are a truly talented poet <3

For Thalia (In honor of what she went through) 6 months ago

Thank you! Thalia is an amazing friend, and we thought her story might show others that things really do get better. When experiencing rough times, it's hard to see that things get better and that there is hope for everyone, so I wrote this and got her consent to publish it here. 

For Thalia (In honor of what she went through) 6 months ago

I'm so sorry that you had that experience. It must have been awful and neither you nor your friend deserved to go through that. The poem is great and sends a powerful message, there aren't many about this topic so I love the honesty and imagery you used.

For Thalia (In honor of what she went through) 6 months ago

Thank you! :)

The Sea 6 months ago