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I'm with you there! And nothing quite like that crunch beneath your feet, am I right? Sometimes I see a particular leaf and think to myself, Now that is a crispy one, perfect for my foot to make friends with...

Dancing Leaves 1 year ago

Thank you. I was very nervous to share this as I don't write many short stories and this one is close to my heart.
Thank you for being so kind.

Persephone 1 year ago

Wow thank you so much! 

Seasonal Reflection 1 year ago

Thank you so much! 

Gloomy 1 year ago

This is so good!! 

Gloomy 1 year ago

Trying to balance school and something else you love is always hard, and sadly does make anyone feel torn between the two. It can be hard to find a balance or needing to choose one. The picture really captures it well I think

Fork in the Road 1 year ago

I love the rhyming! I think it even adds to the narrator wondering about catching fireflies. Keep writing!

Firefly Catcher 1 year ago

oooo this was so good, especially the last paragraph. Agree with everything YellowS said. What a dark and bold retelling

Persephone 1 year ago

this is simply beautiful. What a stellar opening line too, congrats on the daily read

First Snow 1 year ago

this made me smile

Haunting Hands 1 year ago