This poem is so good!! I love how you paint the picture so well with small sentences.
Thanks :)
Thank you!
I love how the words stretch out down the page as if they themselves are sinking.
It is like a chandelier of different types of lights that was hung around the top of a light post in Quebec City, CAN.
I like how this poem almost falls over itself with lines clamoring for attention and also never stops moving
"Wearing your heart on your sleeve and letting everyone know how you feel...writing with a knife is painful and yet exactly what I need," a powerful line to end a powerful piece
This made me smile, what a lovely image. Keep writing!
This is so, so incredible. As soon as I finished liking it, I had to just read it again. Everything in this is so thoughtful and beautiful; I love it!
This poem is so good!! I love how you paint the picture so well with small sentences.
Thanks :)
Thank you!
Thank you!
I love how the words stretch out down the page as if they themselves are sinking.
It is like a chandelier of different types of lights that was hung around the top of a light post in Quebec City, CAN.
I like how this poem almost falls over itself with lines clamoring for attention and also never stops moving
"Wearing your heart on your sleeve and letting everyone know how you feel...writing with a knife is painful and yet exactly what I need," a powerful line to end a powerful piece
This made me smile, what a lovely image. Keep writing!
This is so, so incredible. As soon as I finished liking it, I had to just read it again. Everything in this is so thoughtful and beautiful; I love it!