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"Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Goldfinch" is this week's featured poem on vtdigger.org, up now in their Life & Culture section. Check it out here, where a new piece is posted every Sunday! vtdigger.org/life-culture

Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Goldfinch 6 months ago

I did, I laughed out loud!

Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Goldfinch 6 months ago

Whenever you can, just write down sentence "scraps" that will drive your new works

Tiny Write by Writer1326, March 23 2024 6 months ago

WOW! I just realized how you separated each line with different emotions: creation vs. destruction, light vs. dark . . . What a beautiful poetic structure!

Elements 6 months ago

Oh, how I love her Poem-- and your interpretation! Your wisdom inspires me. How you hold two truths: There are times when we must bound, leap, and laugh, yet also confine ourselves to the earth Iris was born to sketch. 

The Jump 6 months ago

Using challenges, prompts, or random word generators helps me 

Tiny Write by Writer1326, March 23 2024 6 months ago

This is such a creative idea! How’d you make it happen?

Mirror of Erised 6 months ago

My heart flutters, 

My hands shake,

My mind is cluttered 

And my face breaks.

 

But you make it better

Little by little, bit by bit,

Any day with you I forget her 

Even in a dark room, with you, I'd sit.

 

You are my world,

And everything in it.

Not from a potion swirled

But by your own choice.

 

And I know the world doesn't rhyme,

And the sky isn't blue.

But with you I'd spend all my time,

And know my love is really true.

 

for my girlfriend, who gets me roses 6 months ago

Thank you so much!

eclipse 6 months ago

It looks like it could be in a movie! 👍👍👍

Cat 6 months ago