Hands (traditional Shakespearean sonnet, with intentional rhyme scheme but no iambic pentameter)
Hands, they are vessels of love;
wrinkled or smooth, old or new.
They may, sometimes, shove;
but they, almost always, help ease the blue.
As we grow older,
we give more love.
Sometimes our hands get wrinkled and colder,
but always warm up, like the singing of a morning dove.
Wrinkled hands have delivered more to the younger,
the younger, just learning how.
Older hands drifting ever so slowly to eternal slumber;
but they march on, anyhow.
Hands are love,
and they always forget your lacks-thereof.
Comments
Hands can provide so much affection, in so many ways: a hand cradling a newborn's head, a hand petting a beloved dog, hands held. But they show our age in the same way our wrinkling faces do, sometimes faster; you can't get Botox injections in your hands, after all. So this focus on hands is a clever way to write about love and the passage of time. I think you're really onto something here. And the rhyme is keen!
Thank you! I have to confess, this wasn't my original idea; rather, it was the idea of an older photographer at my church. He presented it with pictures of his mother's hands. One of his mother's hands when she was young, and one of his mother's hands when she was old.
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