Welcome to YWP, phOebe, and thank you for this powerful tribute to the planet! You are so right that "we don't deserve her." Please keep writing – your words will move people to wake up!
Roxy! YWP Alumni have a special place in our hearts, so please drop in anytime and post away. We love to read your writing! Thank you for sharing with us such a profound and personal memory of camp and childhood.
The imagery here is bright and sparkling. You've convinced me that there is always beauty surrounding me, I just have to look a bit harder to find it. The nod to the seasons at the end is lovely!
Ahh, you've truly captured the spirit of Dickinson, not only in your dashes and capitalizations but in your theme! So funny, that she was such a recluse but could give us such wonderful advice about how to approach the world. This certainly does!
Thank you so much!!
Welcome to YWP, phOebe, and thank you for this powerful tribute to the planet! You are so right that "we don't deserve her." Please keep writing – your words will move people to wake up!
wow. just wow.
Roxy! YWP Alumni have a special place in our hearts, so please drop in anytime and post away. We love to read your writing! Thank you for sharing with us such a profound and personal memory of camp and childhood.
Thank you!!!
Ethereal! The crystal-clear quality of that lake -- it's a true mirror. I'd do anything to visit someday!
The imagery here is bright and sparkling. You've convinced me that there is always beauty surrounding me, I just have to look a bit harder to find it. The nod to the seasons at the end is lovely!
Ahh, you've truly captured the spirit of Dickinson, not only in your dashes and capitalizations but in your theme! So funny, that she was such a recluse but could give us such wonderful advice about how to approach the world. This certainly does!
This is so perfect. Infinity has so many definitions, and this poem somehow captures them all in its six short lines. I love it!
This is so beautiful! It looks like a painting.