I want to breathe
Both with looming skyscrapers,
And mountains stretched high,
To feel the sun
Smiling on my skin,
And cold water
Enveloping me in a splash,
To climb trees
Not just to have a new perspective,
But to be one,
To sit tangled
In soil’s masterpiece
And simply be a rough draft,
To write my own final copy
With hand-scrawled lines
Broken with poetry,
Smeared with tears
Dripped from joy
And sadness,
Filled with budding wildflowers
Of hope and inspiration,
To bind the pages
With thread woven
With every smile I’ve beamed
With the sun,
With the breaths I’ve taken
With the mountains
And the city,
With everywhere I have seen,
And every perspective
I’ve been.
Comments
I love how this poem challages cliches. "I want to breath/ BOTH with looming skyscrapers and mountains stretched high." Beautifully done!
Thank you so much!
I can always see your appreciation for life peeking through in your work, and it's so refreshing. You speak of embracing not just the happy moments, but the difficult moments touched with sadness as well, sort of in the vein of, "If it never rains, how will I know the sun when it shines?" I think that's a remarkable outlook to have in life, and I hope you never lose it! I also LOVED the image of a person growing out of the soil as a "rough draft" of themselves. You have some original ideas here!
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