I cannot write right

I feel like a crap poet today
My ideas are slow and my similies strange
My metaphors suck like lollipops
See
There are too many words and too few ideas
Too many adverbs and too few adjectives
Too many toos and too few fews
And the endings are terrible
 

ZoeBee

VT

19 years old

More by ZoeBee

  • 1893

    It was just a fluke that I happened to see

    The ghost of a girl in 1893

    I didn't think much of her, tried to ignore

    But then she came 'round in 1894

    A spirit was not something that I had wanted

  • Papercuts

    Did you know that, when you wrote me, I was made of papercuts

    That I was ink and glue and wax but mostly, I was papercuts

    Did you know that, when you read me, I am made of memories