This poem is beautiful and has a complex feel while still being understandable and relatable. Splitting up the word "everything" from the first line was such a smart idea that made it feel so much more powerful.
If I knew then what I know now, Would I have done it? Would I have leaped into the abyss of black inky darkness, Like a never-ending chapter of the Twilight Zone, Strange things happened down there. I was moving so fast,
When I was little, I always thought trees were abundant, Never-ending, Going on forever, That's how it always seemed, I would get strapped up in the car and all I could see were flashes of green in the spring,
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This poem is beautiful and has a complex feel while still being understandable and relatable. Splitting up the word "everything" from the first line was such a smart idea that made it feel so much more powerful.
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